Sunday, September 14, 2008

Chapter 1 : The leader is Max

Once upon a time there were 25 kids who lived at amercican street and there houses were in a long row that never ended.This story is about 25 kids who are are more speicial than the other people in their neighbourhood. So let us get back to the story.
They are more speicial beacause they have great powers and the leaders name
is MAX.CHAPTER 1: The leaders name is Max.So Max was taking a shower and then his mom called Max!Then he said what!?
Then his mom said your friends are here and then when he heard the word "friends"he got dressed up really really fast
  1. so then when he went downstairs he saw his parents and his brother Mack and his sister Alena and then his youngest brother James.When Max and his family came to the bus they met Max's friends and his parents friends and his families friends so when he went to the HC (HC stands for hero cave) so Max's favorite place to go to is the HC and his hair color is yellowish brownish is his hair color and Max lives in L.A in a big green house where his friends also live there in the same big green house he is also well-mannered.His favorite junk food is french fries,pizza,bread sticks,and garlic bread.His favorite healthy food is is anything.His age is 9 years old.His favorite video game is any viedogame except Gamecube.So when he stopped at the HC he looked at all his wild pets and when he looks at the best pet he got then he said he feels like he is day-dreaming that he is on the most mag because he like that pet the most because that has the most magic and it is all the cats from the cat family beacause he choosed it to be the best mobile he had and he want'd it to have the most magic so it has the most magic of all.
So he took out his most magical pet out of the glass door and rode that to his school and gave it to his parents and his whole family came to his because he was staying for 2 hours and his teacher called his family to his school and his school is called B.M.S HIGH SCHOOL (B.M.S stands for bright mind school)and it is in 212 #DISTRICT so when he and his family came to the school there were lots of people there and there were games,food,activities,video games,and lots of other things there so B.M.S is going to have a Ferris wheel at the fair and so when he came there he saw so many people to graduate him because he was the winner of the school for 3 more years and he was a winner of the school because he worked harder than all the 12th graders and he was a 9th grader but 12th ends high school.So he was better than the 20eth graders so when he heard that he was amazed.


9 comments:

Puneet Sharma said...

great awesome story shlok..who is the main character of this story...
dad

SZS said...

so dad there are lots of main charecters actually 25 main charecters I dont want to tell all the names now but the leader is MAX.... SHLOK ZART SHARMA

Balu said...

Good story Shlok! What kind of powers did these characters have? Could someone fly or be invisible or was someone really smart? Or may be some one was good at playing a piano? Hope to read more from you soon.
Prachi Bua

SZS said...

So Prachi Bua some charecters can fly some can lift 1000000 towers some can run really fast and some can throw flames and some can some can explode so they can make a Kaboom!There are lots of kids who can do a lot of things like -E-. from SHLOKZARTSHARMA

Balu said...

Great story. By the way, are those kids helpful to their parents, friends and elderly people? Does Max have magic stick? I cannot wait to read the full story.
Balu.

Balu said...

Dear Shlok,
We need to know more about the 25 kids. When will you complete the story?
Love,
Dadiji

Anonymous said...

Dear Shlok you write exceedingly well.The story apprears to be very interesting.please complete it fast.I can also offer some ideas if you want though I am confident that you can write own your own.
Dadaji

Anonymous said...

Dear Shlok,
Ihave written ' own your own'.Please read it' on your own' in the earlier message.
Dadaji

Anonymous said...

Shlok does write very well. His new story is even better than the previous one.